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This would have worked slightly better if I'd found a visual way to depict several hours passing ... it's close, it just needs something with the sun shifting, or something. Then I could cut the middle thoughts. A lame shot at an ending quip. I think it needs one, just not this one.
I can't believe I was still pumping these out 3 times a week at this point.
Title: Cross Country. Originally aired: 4.21.04
Disclaimer: this comic is discontinued, and that won't change.
I can't believe I was still pumping these out 3 times a week at this point.
Title: Cross Country. Originally aired: 4.21.04
Disclaimer: this comic is discontinued, and that won't change.
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i think the big bleed panel goes a long way to that time dilation. it does feel like a long time, but maybe accurately describing the time in the captions cheapens it a little? dunno. i guess you have a timeframe to keep to, having told us how long it'll take those atmospheric ships to be ready.